From 33937e27f8e8a08d2909831df4e835902d522792 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: teastep Date: Tue, 2 May 2006 03:13:58 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Improve the wording of the new warnings -- again git-svn-id: https://shorewall.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/shorewall/trunk@3835 fbd18981-670d-0410-9b5c-8dc0c1a9a2bb --- docs/MultiISP.xml | 8 ++++---- docs/traffic_shaping.xml | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/MultiISP.xml b/docs/MultiISP.xml index f8ae4dc35..a1fe9c7e2 100644 --- a/docs/MultiISP.xml +++ b/docs/MultiISP.xml @@ -49,10 +49,10 @@ Reading just Shorewall documentation is probably not going to give you enough background to use this material. Shorewall may make iptables - easy but the Shorewall team simply can't be expected to spoon-feed Linux - policy routing to you (please remember that the user's manual for a - tractor doesn't teach you to grow corn either). You will need to refer to - at least the following additional information: + easy but the Shorewall team doesn't have the resources to be able to + spoon-feed Linux policy routing to you (please remember that the user's + manual for a tractor doesn't teach you to grow corn either). You will + likely need to refer to the following additional information: diff --git a/docs/traffic_shaping.xml b/docs/traffic_shaping.xml index 2d67bb5bc..90f81311b 100644 --- a/docs/traffic_shaping.xml +++ b/docs/traffic_shaping.xml @@ -62,8 +62,8 @@ spoon-feed Linux traffic control to you (please remember that the user's manual for a tractor doesn't teach you to grow corn either). - You will need to refer to at least the following additional - information: + At a minimum, you will need to refer to at least the following + additional information: @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ - The documents listed at Some of the documents listed at http://www.netfilter.org/documentation/index.html#documentation-howto. The tutorial by Oskar Andreasson is particularly good.