diff --git a/docs/LennyToSqueeze.xml b/docs/LennyToSqueeze.xml
index c4ab7405b..676f4c78b 100644
--- a/docs/LennyToSqueeze.xml
+++ b/docs/LennyToSqueeze.xml
@@ -149,11 +149,11 @@
The key change in Squeeze that may produce upgrade issues is that
Squeeze does not include the shell-based configuration compiler. As a
- consequence, unless you have migrated to using Shorewall-perl on Lenny, an
+ consequence, unless you are already using Shorewall-perl on Lenny, an
upgrade from Lenny to Squeeze will mean that you will be switching from
the old shell-based compiler to the new Perl-based compiler. While the two
- compilers are highly-compatible, there are some differences. Those are
- detailed in the following sections.
+ compilers are highly compatible, there are some differences. Those
+ differences are detailed in the following sections.
@@ -591,7 +591,8 @@ NONAT loc - tcp 80
If you have entries in Shorewall extension scripts
(/etc/shorewall/init,
- /etc/shorewall/start, etc.), you should review
+ /etc/shorewall/start, etc.) or if you have
+ implemented an Action that uses an extension script, you should review
this article.