From 542f0d1b9695601bfa9606bb2c24a3179115312f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: judas_iscariote <judas_iscariote@fbd18981-670d-0410-9b5c-8dc0c1a9a2bb>
Date: Thu, 8 Sep 2005 05:11:13 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] fix broken link and other little things

git-svn-id: https://shorewall.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/shorewall/trunk@2644 fbd18981-670d-0410-9b5c-8dc0c1a9a2bb
---
 Shorewall-docs2/support.xml | 28 +++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Shorewall-docs2/support.xml b/Shorewall-docs2/support.xml
index 77ca3f3ab..b75534019 100644
--- a/Shorewall-docs2/support.xml
+++ b/Shorewall-docs2/support.xml
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
         <para>The <ulink url="FAQ.htm">FAQ</ulink> has solutions to more than
-        40 common problems.</para>
+        50 common problems.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
           <programlisting><command>/sbin/shorewall trace start 2&gt; /tmp/trace</command></programlisting>
 
           <para>Forward the <filename>/tmp/trace</filename> file as an
-          attachment (you may compress it if you like).</para>
+          attachment (you must compress it).</para>
         </blockquote>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ State:Stopped (Tue Aug 30 14:08:11 PDT 2005)</programlisting>
 
       <listitem>
         <para>If Shorewall is starting successfully and your problem is that
-        some set of <emphasis role="bold">connection</emphasis>s to/from or
+        some set of <emphasis role="bold">connections</emphasis> to/from or
         through your firewall <emphasis role="bold">isn't working</emphasis>
         (examples: local systems can't access the internet, you can't send
         email through the firewall, you can't surf the web from the firewall,
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ State:Stopped (Tue Aug 30 14:08:11 PDT 2005)</programlisting>
 
           <listitem>
             <para>Post the <filename>/tmp/status.txt</filename> file as an
-            attachment (you may compress it if you like).</para>
+            attachment (you must compress it).</para>
           </listitem>
 
           <listitem>
@@ -207,9 +207,10 @@ State:Stopped (Tue Aug 30 14:08:11 PDT 2005)</programlisting>
           <listitem>
             <para><emphasis role="bold">Please do not edit the diagnostic
             information</emphasis> in an attempt to conceal your IP address,
-            netmask, nameserver addresses, domain name, etc. These aren't
-            secrets, and concealing them often misleads us and may prevent
-            your problem from being looked at all together.</para>
+            netmask, nameserver addresses, domain name, etc. These <emphasis
+            role="bold">aren't secrets</emphasis>, and concealing them often
+            misleads us and may prevent your problem from being looked at all
+            together.</para>
           </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
       </listitem>
@@ -285,10 +286,11 @@ State:Stopped (Tue Aug 30 14:08:11 PDT 2005)</programlisting>
       <listitem>
         <para>As a general matter, <emphasis role="bold">please do not edit
         the diagnostic information</emphasis> in an attempt to conceal your IP
-        address, netmask, nameserver addresses, domain name, etc. These aren't
-        secrets, and concealing them often misleads us (and 80% of the time, a
-        hacker could derive them anyway from information contained in the SMTP
-        headers of your post).</para>
+        address, netmask, nameserver addresses, domain name, etc. These
+        <emphasis role="bold">aren't secrets</emphasis>, and concealing them
+        often misleads us (and 80% of the time, a hacker could derive them
+        anyway from information contained in the SMTP headers of your
+        post).</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -317,8 +319,8 @@ State:Stopped (Tue Aug 30 14:08:11 PDT 2005)</programlisting>
       <listitem>
         <para>The author gratefully acknowleges that the above list was
         heavily plagiarized from the excellent LEAF document by <emphasis>Ray
-        Olszewski</emphasis> found at <ulink
-        url="http://leaf-project.org/pub/doc/docmanager/docid_1891.html">http://leaf-project.org/pub/doc/docmanager/docid_1891.html</ulink>.</para>
+        Olszewski</emphasis> found <ulink
+        url="http://leaf-project.org/index.php?module=pagemaster&amp;PAGE_user_op=view_page&amp;PAGE_id=6&amp;MMN_position=21:21">here</ulink>.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>