Improve the wording of the new warnings -- again

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<warning>
<para>Reading just Shorewall documentation is probably not going to give
you enough background to use this material. Shorewall may make iptables
easy but the Shorewall team simply can't be expected to spoon-feed Linux
policy routing to you (please remember that the user's manual for a
tractor doesn't teach you to grow corn either). You will need to refer to
at least the following additional information:</para>
easy but the Shorewall team doesn't have the resources to be able to
spoon-feed Linux policy routing to you (please remember that the user's
manual for a tractor doesn't teach you to grow corn either). You will
likely need to refer to the following additional information:</para>
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spoon-feed Linux traffic control to you (please remember that the user's
manual for a tractor doesn't teach you to grow corn either).</para>
<para>You will need to refer to at least the following additional
information:</para>
<para>At a minimum, you will need to refer to at least the following
additional information:</para>
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<para>The documents listed at <ulink
<para>Some of the documents listed at <ulink
url="http://www.netfilter.org/documentation/index.html#documentation-howto">http://www.netfilter.org/documentation/index.html#documentation-howto</ulink>.
The tutorial by Oskar Andreasson is particularly good.</para>
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